Paige's recount.

WALHT write a recount.

Success Criteria:
I can use the 5 Ws (who, what, where, when, why) and sometimes how.

Lachlan's Recount

IALHT use capital letters and full stops.

Success Criteria (SC)
I can start my sentences with a capital letter.
I can end each sentence with a full stop.

I ran very fast up the hill.
I took my trainers off when I got back.
I had lots of nutragrain.

Zahra's writing about a journey

WALHT write a narrative about a place we will journey to. 

Success Criteria

I need to say where I'm travelling to

I need to include some descriptive words

I need to say what I can see. 

When I am a Mum I am going to live in Outer Space. I am going to see some shooting stars and they are really sparkly. I can see a Rocket Ship shooting as fast as a whale. I see a white moon. The background is black all over the space ship. I can see the people.

Zahra